- Lots of Ideas, good use of visual thinking
- Good range of ideas in sketchbook
- Lots of different methods of using Ink explored
- Good use of varied brush strokes - works well with two colour rule
- Explored a real range of different possibilities, very thorough
- Powerful Imagery, extensive range
- Well explored application of media
- Digitally finishing work was a nice touch
- Striking Images
- Good use of continuous line/boarder
- Good use of space
- Hands in final landscape are powerful/Intimidating
- Developed more ideas further
- Try taking more ideas out of the sketchbook
- Tried a broader range of media to investigate relationship with subject
- Tone down style
- Consider theme of article
- Developed more Ideas from initial idea generation
- Broader range of media ; Charcoal pencil
Tutor Feedback:
Fred called me over just to quickly mention i should try using different coloured stock, so as though I'm not battling with the white paper all the time so my lines can be more subtle. Can't believe I haven't thought of that. I'm a ball-bag
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