Crit.

Peer Crit.

Partners; Crit two other peoples work; 20minutes(Give or take) Each
Self Crit.
Art still in early stages; Still finding my feet; Try more media, thinking about collaging somethings; Own interpritation of facts is going to be clear enough, egotistical? Will it make sense? Is it interesting enough, Work harder.

Concept change too frequently

Want to do an a5 hardback book, time?, Just starting finished artwork, cutting it close, Too reliant on that I work fast, Might weird people out..good?

Action plan: Draw.Draw.Draw.Draw.Draw.Draw.Draw.Draw.Draw.Draw.Draw.Draw.Draw.Draw.Draw.Draw.Draw.Draw.Draw.Draw.Draw.Draw.Draw.Draw.Draw.Draw.Draw.Draw.Draw.Draw.Draw.Draw.Draw.Draw.Draw.Draw.Draw.Draw.Draw.Draw.Draw....breathe....Paint.Paint.Paint.Paint.Paint.Paint.Paint.Paint.Paint.Paint.Paint.Paint.Paint.Paint.Paint.Paint.Paint.Paint.Paint.Paint.Paint.Paint.Paint.Paint.Paint.Paint.Paint.Paint.Paint.Paint.Paint.Paint.Paint.Paint.Paint.Paint.Paint.Paint.Paint.Paint.Paint.Paint.........Repeat.

Feedback:

1.

• Refine the facts more, reword them to sound more proffestional or get more
• Binding? Dark Theme Suggests something robust; leather bound? Still think about keeping it low-fi a d.i.y job.
• Don't do concertina
• A5 Good size
• Get more facts
• sketch more skamps and Ideas
• Make more book tests
• Draw buddy 

2.

• Try finding a new media for variety
• Have you thought about how you're going to bind it, how many pages?
• Is it going to be analogue or digital?
• Experiment more