Statement of Intent - Peer Review 1

Comment on Clarity of Rationale
Strengths
I think the rationale is Clear. Youve stated the type of work you want to be producing and improving more of-Good that you've got and aim to work towards.
Suggestions
Have you identified professionals you want to work with in this field?
Start contacting them.

Comment on Clarity and Appropriatness
Strengths
Themes and subjects are appropriate - It's very you. Related to rationale-Comment on modern culture and society
Suggestions
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Comment on appropriateness of products and distribution
Strengths
Good range of products to start off with
Suggestions
Could maybe look at making Zines each month or something with different themes live you've mentioned

Comment on appropriateness of skills/meda
Strengths
Skills/Media/Process all seem relevant to your practice - good to be improving the skills you're good at but also good to look at other skills like sewing and animation
Suggestions
I think you'd be good at making those short panel comics in newspapers that comment on modern culture and society - could give comics a go

Briefs
Brief 1 : Tattoo Flash
Clarity appropriateness of Brief
Good that you're producing tattoo flash once a week - being constant is good
Considerations/Suggestions
Will you be designing flash that has different themes each week? Might be a good challenge for you

Brief 2: Anti Briefs
Clarity appropriateness of Brief
Brief will allow you to improve skills in making work for clients/time management and meeting deadlines
Considerations/Suggestions
Have you started looking for any live / competition briefs

Brief 3: I-D
Clarity appropriateness of Brief
Good idea to go back and try and tackle a brief in a different way and hopefully and improved way,
Considerations/Suggestions
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Brief 4: Animation
Clarity appropriateness of Brief
Will allow you to improve you animation skills you said you wanted to improve
Considerations/Suggestions
Look at the loop-de-loop competition (cant remember what it's called but it's on e-studio)

Breif 5: Flyers
Clarity appropriateness of Brief
I DON'T UNDERSTAND THIS ONE
Considerations/SuggestionsI DON'T UNDERSTAND THIS ONE