My boards kept the same colour scheme through out, while showing the diversity of my product and the ease in which is transfers to different mediums to effect kids (11) and Dads of that generation. I think for a first go round they're not bad. I'll see what the crit brings and if my ideas are working how I think they are.
Crit main points.
The good
The good
- Good character design
- Well thought out execution of style
- Good colour scheme
- Timeline idea is nice
- Lots of different platforms looked at
- More text on boards
- Explain the armor maybe
- Tagline maybe?
- Explanations on statistics, why kids need to read
- Maybe two timelines for a boy and a girl monster
I agree with all those points accept the last one, I think the monsters and pretty genderless and to make a female monster means there need to be an end point (grown up monster) which would in turn mean I'd have to draw a Mum monster. It's not the work load that bothers me about drawing another it's that the brief does say it's focusing on Dads and adding a Mummy monster, in my opinion would take away from that.
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